Your message, your tone – just in English.


Help Prospective Guests Understand Your Hotel and Plan Their Stay
Created by Kirsty Low Translation – German-to-English translation, transcreation and SEO translation.
Review your English website from the perspective of someone considering a stay. Can they understand what you offer, compare their options and find the information they need before booking?
Start with your homepage, room pages and booking information, then follow the links into your booking system. Complete the sections relevant to your hotel.
For each item, record one status:
You can assess many points using the English website and your knowledge of the hotel. Others require comparison with the German source. Fluent English can still change a condition or leave out an important detail, so mark anything you cannot confidently assess as “Not sure”.
Example: “Rooms with a balcony” and “All rooms have a balcony” make different promises. Check that the English preserves the distinction in your German text.
Example: “Spa access included” may need more detail. Which facilities does this cover, and does it apply to every rate? Confirm the intended meaning before revising the English.
This section helps you identify unclear wording or differences between versions. Any legal assessment of booking terms should be handled by an appropriately qualified adviser.
Complete the checks relevant to your facilities.
German:
Lassen Sie den Tag in unserer gemütlichen Stube ausklingen.
Overly literal English:
Let the day fade away in our cosy parlour.
Possible adaptation:
Round off your day in our cosy lounge.
The adaptation expresses the invitation naturally while retaining its warmth. “Lounge” is appropriate only if it accurately describes the space; a traditional dining room might need different wording.
Wording that seems awkward or difficult to interpret in English is worth reviewing, but a stylistic preference alone does not make a translation wrong. The question is whether the wording accurately describes what your hotel offers and conveys its character in an appropriate voice.
Use a separate entry for each issue you want to follow up.
Page or booking step:
[Your answer]
Wording or information to review:
[Your answer]
Status:
[Checked / Needs attention / Not sure / Not applicable]
What needs to happen?
For example, confirm a room feature internally, clarify what a rate includes or request a bilingual review.
[Your answer]
Who will follow this up?
[Your answer]
Start by reviewing room features, prices, included services and booking conditions. Unclear or inaccurate wording in these areas could affect a guest’s booking decision or lead them to expect something different from what you offer. Then review descriptions and voice more closely.
Some issues will need factual clarification within your team. Others may call for a targeted revision or a fuller review of the English against the German.
If you decide to commission language work, the Translation Brief Template can help you bring together the relevant pages, reference materials and questions.